最近の英作文の添削です

I am interested in becoming a psychological counselor.

Because I am curious about mental health,brain and consciousness.

（becomingは出てこない…）

I realized I have been intersted in these things for a long time/for several years/since college.←こういうの出てこない…

As a matter of fact,I tried to change my major to Psychology Department when I was in college.

Yesterday,I found an intersting TV series show on Netflix.←いつも間違う…

That It is a documentary by Jonah Hill.I have watched a lot of his movies.←That なのかItなのかやっぱわからない…

But I didn't know that he has struggled with depression.

I'm surprised because I think he is a good comedian.←I think の位置の違いによるニュアンス！

On In this show,Jonah Hill interviewd his therapist.←前置詞😢昔よりわかってきたけどやっぱり間違っちゃう！

He said he could recover from depression with his help.

I'd like to know how this therapist cures his patients.

And I wish I could I want to  I think I would want to be a good therapist.←できたらいいな〜系も私の中では難関！

１２月お休みした英作文もまた年末から復活しました〜

しんどいけど絶対力がつく感じあるのでまた続けます！